Saturday, June 4, 2011

Saturday Centus!

Hey everyone-I'm happy to be joining Mizz Jenny for Saturday Centus! This week we only have
25 words to play with and the prompt is "the end".

The End
Tighten it up and edit fiercely, it should be succinct writing you seek.    
Looks like the end will come sooner, rather than later this week.    

Have a happy day:@)
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30 comments:

  1. jeff campbellJune 4, 2011 at 8:24 AM

    Oh my...this is very nicely done...a quite creative approach to our assignment where the distance between beginning and ending is quite short...Peace and blessings

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  2. Kim LehnhoffJune 4, 2011 at 8:54 AM

    It's a page turner...but only one page!

    Great job!

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  3. Barbara F.June 4, 2011 at 9:21 AM

    You are so good at this! xo,

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  4. Carol @ There's Always Thyme to CookJune 4, 2011 at 9:25 AM

    Great job!

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  5. Flavia GalassoJune 4, 2011 at 9:45 AM

    WOw...great job....have a GREAT weekend, hugs, Flavia

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  6. UnknownJune 4, 2011 at 9:50 AM

    Excellent work Ms. Piggy! The meter is tight and the rhyming a perfectly pointed touch! I hope to be able to play as well but (shhhhh) I'm at work and am not to suppose to be on my personal laptop.

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  7. shannon i olsonJune 4, 2011 at 10:17 AM

    Nice, that end does indeed sneak up on ya!

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  8. cj SchlottmanJune 4, 2011 at 10:52 AM

    This post made me want to dance a jig, maybe even pet a pig!

    Namaste.........cj

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  9. www.thewhitefarmhouse2.blogspot.comJune 4, 2011 at 11:03 AM

    You are so good at this. You should think of writing as a job. Love the wisdom in this little message!

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  10. ChristineJune 4, 2011 at 11:19 AM

    Why do you make it look so easy.

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  11. Susan AndersonJune 4, 2011 at 11:28 AM

    Nice! And fun, too.

    =)

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  12. NonnaJune 4, 2011 at 11:44 AM

    Awesome and so cute and clever !!!

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  13. Skoots1moMJune 4, 2011 at 12:30 PM

    one of my best things in english lit was the ability to write concisely...great job!

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  14. Dazee DreamerJune 4, 2011 at 12:34 PM

    ha. loved it. I felt the urgency.

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  15. AmesJune 4, 2011 at 12:43 PM

    Ha ha! That was great! And exactly how I feel!~Ames :)

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  16. Kay EllenJune 4, 2011 at 1:56 PM

    Happy Pink Saturday!
    you are very creative:))

    Have a blessed weekend!

    xo
    Kay Ellen

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  17. JingleJune 4, 2011 at 4:00 PM

    compact and fun one.
    love it.
    :)

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  18. jfb57June 4, 2011 at 4:35 PM

    Brilliant! Such a great rhyme!

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  19. AnonymousJune 4, 2011 at 5:01 PM

    As always, your are wonderful with words, Lynn!
    Hope you are having a terrific weekend!

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  20. Rawknrobyn.blogspot.comJune 4, 2011 at 5:35 PM

    Great rhyme. Very relevant!

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  21. LaJune 4, 2011 at 7:57 PM

    Short and sweet. Good job!

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  22. lindaJune 5, 2011 at 12:09 AM

    I agree with all above.

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  23. JoJune 5, 2011 at 1:15 AM

    loved this rhyme! well done!

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  24. bjJune 5, 2011 at 5:55 AM

    Gosh, girl...you are really good at this.
    xo bj

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  25. BookieJune 5, 2011 at 2:08 PM

    Cute writing scenario...nicely done.

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  26. TgoetteJune 5, 2011 at 10:52 PM

    Oh that was so clever! If Jenny had cheerleaders that is what they would be shouting on the sidelines! LOL!

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  27. Rek SeshJune 6, 2011 at 3:49 AM

    Good one...very clever writing...loved the "three little pigs" header. :)

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  28. UnknownJune 6, 2011 at 11:28 AM

    Well done!
    Best wishes,
    Anna
    Miss O'Hara's Last Words-SC wk 57

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  29. Lynette KillamJune 6, 2011 at 3:04 PM

    Oh, I do like this! And it is the approach I take to writing...sometimes don't know when to sop condensing and leave the work alone...LOL!

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  30. JennyJune 11, 2011 at 4:05 PM

    Hey, you should work for Readers Digest Condensed books. Hmmm...maybe they're totally out of business.

    But this was awesome!

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